Evaluation Part 4

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Evaluation Part 2

Evaluation Part 1

Evaluation Screening Feedback

Group Feedback

 

What the Group Liked about the Trailer:

They thought that the text was good.

They thought that the flashbacks worked well.

They thought that the narrative was well built.

They enjoyed the suspense.

Thought that the music was good.

Well filmed, cool shot angles.

Production company logo was well made.

Good cinematography.

Good lighting in shed scene.

Shots were well framed.

 

 

What the group thinks needs improvement:

 
Soundtrack was a bit dull, needs some more jumps (heartbeats).

Not enough jumps, including a jump at the end.

Didn’t understand who the man was in the bench flashback scene.

Ends abruptly.

Scene with strangling/beating up man needs to be better explained.

Sound effects on impact moments.

Music needs a climax.

Narrative needs a better explanation.

Some of the shots of Keith were a bit too long.

Needs more quick, jumpy shots.

Too short overall.

Needs a montage at the end of Keith killing people.

Need to justify the red band.

Evaluation: focus group screening

Magazine cover: Flickr Analysis

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